He said that the writer creates a dream for the reader, and the writer must do nothing which wakes the reader up. Getting viewpoint right is a major part of keeping the reader within your dream. Here are some other mistakes which will wake the reader up. The author uses language in such a way that the reader is aware of the reading and the author.
What I'm reading and writing. I recently came across some warnings for fiction writers against using adverbs, those -ly words that modify adjectives and verbs. I even used one in the previous sentence: I understand that overuse of adverbs could make your writing look silly and that overuse of any particular tool is to be avoided.
However, these writers insisted that adverbs should be shunned, that you should exorcise them from your prose and rewrite any sentence containing one. In short, using adverbs is bad writing for fiction writers. Unfortunately, these writers did not explain why adverbs are bad for fiction.
When someone states an absolute rule about language, particularly when they don't explain it, warning signals go off for me. Adverbs shade the meaning of the words they modify. They are grammatical and an accepted part of speech.
I've seen them used by well-respected writers. So, what's behind the injunctions against adverbs? Here's some advice I gathered in my search for the case against adverbs.
Adverbs are redundant when paired with strong verbs. There is no other way to mope than with sadness and when someone whispers, they are being quiet. Writers misuse adverbs to explain dialogue, combining emotions with speaker attributions when those emotions should be clear from the dialogue itself.
If the dialogue carries its own weight, adding flying buttresses with adverbs makes it appear weak.
The dialogue records an accusation. Nothing is gained from telling the reader again. Adverbs are used to prop up weak verbs. Adverbs lead writers to tell rather than show. Instead of telling readers that a character "reads incessantly", show us the stack of books and magazines blocking the door; his reading glasses in the front pocket of his shirt; the many scars from paper cuts crisscrossing his fingers.
Adverbs lead to subtle point-of-view problems. For example, Joe is the POV character but the writer states that "Sue looked at the merchant incredulously.If you’d like more in-depth and personalized advice that I can give on this blog, please visit my Mary Kole Editorial website, to learn how you can work with me directly on your query letter, manuscript, or other writing-related project.
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* John Gardner, The Art Of Fiction Stephen King’s On Writing is an entertaining read but some of his advice needs to be taken with a pinch of salt — ‘the road to hell is paved with adverbs’.
There’s a good game that can be played in creative writing workshops of. Because if you look beyond Gardner’s opinions, you will find a hearty serving of helpful advice. Gardner discusses everything from sentence structure to plot.
His explanation of the “fictional dream” and his advice for crafting effective sentences are especially valuable. On Becoming a Novelist contains the wisdom accumulated during John Gardner's distinguished twenty-year career as a fiction writer and creative writing teacher.
With elegance, humor, and sophistication, Gardner describes the life of a working novelist; warns what needs to be guarded against, both from within the writer and from without; /5(74).
Use Adverbs Sparingly All adverbs, save temporal ones—quickly, suddenly, immediately, etc.—are unnecessary, and the mark of a distracted writer, which is to say a weak writer.
Adjectives and adverbs are modifiers.
Adjectives modify nouns whereas adverbs modify verbs, other adverbs, adjectives, phrases, and clauses. In .